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Retirement. Publishers, thank you for the many years of reading pleasure you gave me, but all good things must come to an end. Due to failing eyesight I am forced to retire. I can no longer review your books, and any that you send will be donated to the local library, unread. Do not send any more. I can only read for a couple hours every day, and this does not allow me to finish a book in reasonable time. I will be devoting time to my own books from now on, and reading on a personal level. Books that interest me. I prefer paperbacks and hardbacks, not eBooks. My eyesight has been failing the last few years, and I cannot handle hundreds of review books any more. My books are still available for review. Anyone interested in reviewing any of them, they are found in the Link to Tom’s Books On Amazon. Contact me for pdf copies at fadingshadows40@gmail.com

Thursday, August 14, 2014

Citing Your Sources Guest Blog By Nikolos Baron

Citing Your Sources and Other Ways to Avoid Plagiarism
Plagiarism can be the death of your career. It can take a very promising career or an already established one and tear it down to nothing. Students have been kicked out of college and professors fired from their jobs over plagiarism. Some do not think it’s that big of a deal. “Who cares?” they whine. “Who is going to look for it? Nobody will even notice.” Nevertheless, a writer’s work is always scrutinized to the "nth" degree by editors, fellow writers, and readers. For this reason, someone will catch you eventually if you are guilty of plagiarism. It may not happen the first time or the second, but at some point, a good reader will notice that you have stolen material from someone else. For some people, “borrowing” from someone else's writing may seem like a good idea. These individuals may argue, “I want to explain it just like this author did,” or “I can’t think of a better way to show what I’m trying to say.” They might even admit, “This is better than I can do, and I’m too lazy to try to do it myself.” However, plagiarism is never a good idea. It will only make you enough money for bus fare in the writing world.
            So if plagiarism is such an easy trap to fall into, how do writers avoid it? There are many easy ways to avoid plagiarism. In fact, it’s easier to avoid plagiarism than commit it. Think about how long it would take you to find a good source to plagiarize from. Then you have to read the material, or at least find the spot you remember in the text, and copy it over. After spending all that time copying it over, you may think that you need to change it just a little bit to “confuse” the reader into believing you did not plagiarize, which takes more time. After all that time, would it be really worth all that effort to plagiarize? It’s much faster to write your own material and cite your sources. Taking a few extra minutes to think of your own description or analysis of what you want to write is more valuable than searching through Google.
Writers should take pride in the fact that they’ve come up with interesting, intriguing, and unique material, not that they found the best source to steal from. Writers should feel as if they have to write to express their ideas, make a change, or just inform people of important information. Writers should feel the need to give credit where credit’s due. Whenever you’re in doubt as a writer, always cite the material. Many editors and freelance employers I’ve had checked my work against websites like Plagium, CopyScape, and Grammarly. You will be fired if they find plagiarism in your work. Originality is what they’re looking for, not copy/paste. Writing your own material and citing your sources are always the best ways to avoid plagiarizing, even if it takes a little bit more time.
            I’ve noted some sources above that can be used to check your work for plagiarism. These programs check your work against tons of other sources to make sure it is clean and original. Although CopyScape and Plagium are dedicated to only finding plagiarized material, Grammarly offers many other services like a grammar and punctuation checker, context-optimized synonym generator, teaching tools, question and answer boards, and the ability to identify your most common errors and teach you how to avoid them. There are hundreds of free, online plagiarism checkers to take advantage of as a writer. There are also bunches of online bibliography tools, like Son of Citation Machine, that can help you easily put together your sources and teach you how to cite them within your text. All of the tools are free and easy to use--much easier than trying to plagiarize “gracefully.” Checking your work with a plagiarism checker along with citing sources and writing original material will save you from the career mistake that is plagiarism.
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 Bio:
Nikolas discovered his love for the written word in Elementary School, where he started spending his afternoons sprawled across the living room floor devouring one Marc Brown children’s novel after the other and writing short stories about daring pirate adventures. After acquiring some experience in various marketing, business development, and hiring roles at internet startups in a few different countries, he decided to re-unite his professional life with his childhood passions by joining Grammarly’s marketing team in San Francisco. He has the pleasure of being tasked with talking to writers, bloggers, teachers, and others about how they use Grammarly’s online proofreading application to improve their writing. His free time is spent biking, traveling, and reading.


Wednesday, August 13, 2014

Black Karma

Black Karma (Action/Mystery)
By Thatcher Robinson
Seventh Street Books www.seventhstreetbooks.com
ISBN #978-1616140038
275 Pages
Price $12.63
Rating 5-Stars

“A Complicated Plot, Filled With Action, Danger, And Mystery.”

Bai Jiang (pronounced Bi Chang) is a souxun – a finder of missing people. She and her partner Lee Li (also her martial arts instructor) work out of her office on Grant Street in San Francisco’s Chinatown. Bai was the daughter of a Shan Chu – the head of the Sun Yee On triad, but when her parents were killed her uncle Tommy Hu took over the leadership and raised her; this makes her a triad princess, which she tries to put behind her by helping others. Her ex-husband, is a Hung Kwan, the second in line to the leadership, and commands a small army of triad soldiers. He still protects his ex-wife and their 13-year old daughter, Dan, so when things get dangerous she has plenty of back up, whether she wants – or needs – it or not.

Inspector Kelly of the SFPD approaches her to find Daniel Chin, who the police suspects of killing policemen in a botched drug sting. Bai thinks something is phony with the task, but wants to find Chin anyway, to see what is going on.

This is the second book in the series, and is a complicated plot, filled with lots of action, danger, and mystery. Before it concludes, people will die, and Bai will find another stray to take under her protective wing. The author has created characters from the shady realm of international organized crime, but some you quickly learn to love and respect, as they live by a code the bad guys don’t want to cross. When you meet Bai Jiang and Lee Li, you will want more of them. Highly recommended for action and mystery lovers of all ages.

Tom Johnson
Detective Mystery Stories


Saturday, August 9, 2014

Fight Card Update


Greetings,
Our Fight Card entry this month comes from Nathan Walpow, author of the popular Joe Portugal mystery series (www.walpow.com).  Fight Card: Push takes us behind the scenes and behind the hoopla of the world of professional wrestling.
FIGHT CARD: PUSH
You’re a ‘jobber’. You make your living by losing in the wrestling ring. You’re a good wrestler, but promoters don’t think you have what it takes to become a superstar. Then Thumper shows up. Big and strong, with a bunny-rabbit gimmick and fans eating out of his hand. His finishing move is called The Thump, and most guys don’t get up from it on their own.
One night, Thumper puts his opponent in the hospital. Not a big deal. Sure, the outcome of a wrestling match is fake. But the ‘bumps’ in the ring can be all too real. Sometimes you get hurt. Part of the territory.
Then it happens again. Only this time, the guy who got ‘thumped’ is tossed into a car like a sack of potatoes. Lou Boone, the promoter who runs Central States Wrestling with an iron fist, knows you saw something and offers you a ‘push’ if you keep your mouth shut.
A push. Every jobber’s dream. To get to win some matches, to get to be on the big cards in the big arenas. You want it more than anything. You begin thinking you imagined the sack-of-potatoes guy – until it happens again.
Now, you have to choose between wrestling fame and doing the right thing. Before this is over, someone else will be dead. And you don’t want it to be you…
Based on the short story “Push Comes to Shove,” selected by Lawrence Block for the Best American Mystery Stories series.
As always any mentions on your blogs or via your social networking connections are always appreciated.
We have also recently release or second Fight Card charity anthology, Fight Card Presents: Battling Mahoney & Other Stories, which is available via Amazon as an e-book for $2.99 with 100% of the proceeds going to help the family of the late Jory Sherman. A paperback version will follow shortly.
FIGHT CARD PRESENTS: BATTLING MAHONEY & OTHER STORIES
The second in a series of charity anthologies from the Fight Card authors’ cooperative – a writers’ community featuring many of today’s finest fictioneers – features fifteen rounds of fight fiction from authors James Reasoner, Loren D. Estleman, Len Levinson, James Hopwood, Mark Finn, Jeremy L. C. Jones, Michael Zimmer, Marc Cameron, Nik Morton, Marsha Ward, Clay More, Chuck Tyrell, Bowie V. Ibarra, Art Bowshier, and featuring an extensive essay, On Boxing, by Willis Gordon.
Compiled by Paul Bishop and Jeremy L. C. Jones, 100% of the proceeds from these anthologies go directly to an author-in-need or a literacy charity. Words on paper are the life blood of a writer. The writers in this volume were willing to bleed in order to give a transfusion to one of their own – and then continue to bleed to give a transfusion to literacy charities in support of that most precious of commodities...readers. They are true fighters, every one...
File copies of Fight Card: Push and Fight Card Presents: Battling Mahoney & Other Stories, along with their covers, are attached.
Fight Card’s upcoming line-up includes Bareknuckle Barbarian from Teel James Glenn (featuring the two-fisted adventures of Bob Howard – R.E.H.), Job Girl from Jason Chirevas (the sequel to Monster Man), Joseph Grants long awaited The Guns of November, and a new Fight Card Sherlock Holmes tale from Andrew Salmon.
Until next month … Keep punching …


Friday, August 8, 2014

A Billion Ways To Die

A Billion Ways To Die (Thriller)
By Chris Knopf
The Permanent Press www.thepermanentpress.com
ISBN #978-579623630
272 Pages
Price $29.00
Rating 5-Stars

In this third, and possibly final novel, featuring Arthur Cathcart and his Japanese girlfriend, Natsumi Fitzsgerald, they are vacationing on his sailboat, Detour, when a team of mercenaries kidnaps them and they are tortured for information about a missing billion dollars, which he supposedly has. Unable to find out what they want to know, the kidnappers order the mercs to kill them. Instead, the mercenaries release them.

Now Cathcart wants to know what it’s all about, and soon learns it still involves someone from his past, who is supposed to be in prison. It appears to involve government loans to people in third-world countries, and someone is funneling the money to their own accounts. Somehow, Cathcart is suspected of intercepting the funds and funneling them elsewhere. The FBI and the bad guys are after him and everyone wants the money back – and him dead.

This is an interesting series, and although I never read the first story we’re told that Cathcart’s wife had been into something possibly criminal, and big. Killers shot them both in the head, leaving them for dead.. His wife died, but Cathcart’s sister, a doctor, was able to save him in secret and nurse him back to health. He remains dead to everyone but a retired FBI agent, his sister, and Natsumi. Using his computer skills, he brought his murderers to justice, but he must remain dead, and on the run.  The two books I have read are fascinating entries, and the characters are involved in billion dollar intrigue and danger. The pace is fast, and writing smooth, keeping the reader turning the pages. Highly recommended.

Tom Johnson
Detective Mystery Stories


Wednesday, August 6, 2014

Interview With JoAnna Senger

Interview With JoAnna Senger

I first became aware of JoAnna Senger through her short stories for Barbara Custer’s Night To Dawn magazine. Her writing style easily pulled me into the stories. A few years ago, I read her first published novel, “Betrothal, Betrayal, And Blood”, and was blown away by her writing technique and storytelling ability. JoAnna’s more recent novel, “Reservation Ravaged” just released by NTD also seems to be taking the mystery world by storm. I figured it was time we conducted an interview with this talented lady.

Tom: JoAnna, thank you for sitting down with me for this interview. First, how about telling your fans a little about yourself, your family, and where you live?

JoAnna: I still consider myself a Midwestern girl despite decades in California and now Arizona, still root for the Kansas City Chiefs even though I can’t remember the last time I saw them play live in a stadium.  My family consisted of a mom, dad, little brother and a half-sister.  Only my brother and I are left. Although I still own my home in California, I have to say that I much prefer living in Arizona in the City of Surprise, a small city around 130,000 in the Phoenix metropolitan area. 

I went to Stephens College, a girls’ college in Columbia, Missouri, where I received a Bachelor’s degree with a double major, French and Economics.  Graduate school at the University of California at Berkeley during the 60’s provided me with enough current events to last a lifetime and a Master’s degree in economics.

I am equally comfortable in the world of words and the world of number. 

Tom: From reading your short stories, and now your novels, it is easy to tell you are an experienced writer, how did you get your start, and what is your background?

JoAnna:  You’re really taking me back.  When I was in the fourth grade, we had a choice about a project, and writing a story was one of the choices.  I wrote and illustrated (Lord help us) my first story:  Roo-lah and the Elephant Herd, no doubt influenced by my thorough attention to Tarzan comics.  I have worked as a financial analyst, a computer programmer and systems analyst, a compensation specialist, a Human Resources consultant, and recently as a paralegal.  SO…I’ve written just about everything from technical documentation through legal briefs into fantasy.

Or, maybe it’s all a fantasy.

Tom: What writers influenced you, if any, and whom would you say your writing style most resembles? And are your stories more plot driven or character driven, do you think?

JoAnna:  When I was seven, my parents gave me a wonderful Christmas present: “The Tin Woodsman of Oz,” the first book that I could read myself.  Smitten with the Land of Oz, I went on to buy all the books in the series, and I still have them.  L. Frank Baum was followed by Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings (The Yearling), William Faulkner, Ann Rice, Agatha Christie, Joyce Carol Oates, Stephen King and many others. 

I strive for a style similar to Faulkner’s with respect to abrupt pace change and like Christie’s for subtlety.  With respect to mysteries, I particularly like those mysteries where “who-dun-it” becomes secondary to the extraordinary discoveries made along the way. 

As for plot versus character, I suppose I would put character first.  It seems to me that the characters act according to their nature, and their actions become the plot.  Yet, I usually think of a broad plot outline before I refine the characters.  Once refined, the characters become real to me and, often, I can’t give them up.

Tom: Tell us about your short stories, and a bit about your most recent novel, and which do you prefer writing, novels or short stories? Or do you have a preference either way?

JoAnna:  The novel is most natural to me.  A few of my short stories are stand-alones, and in the future, I will submit only stand-alones to magazines such as Night To Dawn and save the continuous stories for a novel.  I think of writing a novel as similar to making a quilt, which I also do.  Sometimes you need to take a break, and the short story or a table runner does the trick.

Tom: You point out that the human monster is worse than any imaginary creature, and I agree. There is a touch of horror in your first mystery novel, “Betrothal, Betrayal, And Blood”, involving a human monster. But besides horror and mystery, do you consider writing other genres down the road, and if so, what would they be?

JoAnna:  I have written a few children’s stories, as yet unpublished, and sometimes wonder what it would be like to write a column for a newspaper.  So many challenges ahead!

Tom: In your first novel, “Betrothal, Betrayal, And Blood”, you had some very interesting characters, in particular the police investigators and a certain female P.I., are these based on anyone you know (lol)? As you are aware, I’m already a fan of your lady P.I., and hope to see more of her!

JoAnna:  In truth, I see myself, family, friends, and acquaintances in every character I write.  I’ve heard it said that writers just write about themselves and use different disguises.  A former colleague read a very early version of Betrothal, Betrayal, and Blood and saw me clearly in the lady P.I.  I was so flattered! 

When I have strong feelings about someone, that person will definitely wind up in my writing.


Tom: I haven’t read your latest novel, “Reservation Ravaged” yet, so tell us about the story, without giving anything important to the mystery away. Where is the story set, who are the main characters, what the plot is about, that sort of thing. Is this a sequel to “Betrothal, Betrayal, And Blood”?

JoAnna:  “Reservation Ravaged” is set in the fictional city of San Tobino on the Central California Coast, that least known region of the best known state.  The same characters appear as well as a few new players.  However, the book is standalone and does not require the reader to be familiar with the “Betrothal, Betrayal, and Blood.”

Hermione Daggert, now a certified California Private Investigator with her apprenticeship and state exam behind her, is quite confident about her ability to handle an assignment on her own.  A local Indian tribe, the Kanache, asks her to find the man who camped out on their reservation over a year before.  Filled with confidence, she sees only a find-the-man assignment.

How hard can it be?

However, over the past year, that section of the reservation has gone from withered and uninhabitable to aggressively hostile.  When the land claims the life of a beautiful San Tobino socialite in a fiery car crash, Hermione gets a new client. Her job?

Find out why.

Tom: What do you find to be the most exciting part of the creating process to either novels or short stories?

JoAnna:  Ideas come over me and demand my attention, nag at me, give me no peace until I start writing.  The flow of words and the images in my mind invite me into another world, the world I am putting down on paper and yes, I often do write my very first drafts in long hand, a chapter at a time.  This first act of writing, the very beginning of a novel, transports me to another world where I am all-powerful and everything will be as I have said.  Then, I discover myself writing something completely different than what I was thinking, and we’re off to the races.  If I’m using my laptop, I don’t even look at the screen and just write what I see in my mind’s eye.

Weird?  You bet.

Tom: Along the same subject as above, what do you find to be the most difficult area in the creating process?

JoAnna:  Making sure that what I see so clearly in my mind’s eye actually becomes words on the page. I have absorbed the characters and events so thoroughly that I sometimes forget that the reader has not. 

Tom: Besides family and writing, tell us about any hobbies or community services you may be involved in, and any other activity you would like to mention.

JoAnna:  I am volunteered in the Prosecutor’s Office in the City of Surprise as well as the Police Department and went on to an assignment with a criminal defense attorney.  I love to quilt and embroider, maintaining the traditions of the women in my family.  I am the first generation to be raised in suburbia rather than on a farm or ranch. 

Tom: What advice would you give other aspiring authors hoping to break into the writing field today?

JoAnna:  Remain open to all opportunities.  There are so many how-to’s, and each of them worked for somebody.  It’s all so easy once it happens, and so seemingly hopeless before it happens.  The activities I thought would lead somewhere usually didn’t, and then a casual note led me to a bit of success. Throughout it all was the writing, the world of the imagination, and that is an incomparable experience.  When you realize that you would rather fail at writing than be successful at anything else, you know you’re in the right place.

Tom: Where can fans find – and buy - your stories, and do you keep copies on hand for autographs? Please include website and Blogs.

JoAnna:  My novel and short stories can currently be found in Night To Dawn magazine at www.bloodredshadow.com/ My novels are available in print and electronic format through Amazon and B&N.  I blog in www.joannasenger.com.

Tom:  And now a question from left field.  If you could, would you choose to live in a parallel universe as one of the people in the places you create?

JoAnna:  In a heartbeat.  I would go to San Tobino and live forever having safe adventures with Emma, Hermione, Karl and Vito.  Writing about them is the next best thing.

Tom: JoAnna, thank you very much for consenting to this interview.

JoAnna:  It’s been a real pleasure.