Noah’s Rainy Day: A Liv Bergen Mystery (Crime Drama)
By Sandra Brannan
Green Leaf Book Press
ISBN #978-1626340176
386 Pages Price $14.95
Rating 5-Stars
“A Liv Bergen Adventure”
The five-year old son of a multimillionaire is
kidnapped from the Denver International Airport, and the FBI and Denver’s chief
of police are on the case. The father had contacted the FBI Director forcing
him to put Liv Bergen in charge of the investigation, as he had once dated
Liv’s sister. However, the Director assigns the job to Agent Streeter, but with
Liv on the detail. While the investigators set up a command post at DIA, the
kidnapper is actually living next door to Liv’s sister. Noah, Liv’s nephew sees
the missing child but has trouble bringing it to anyone's attention because of
cerebral palsy. The kidnapper, thinking Noah may reveal everything, kidnaps him
also.
As a Liv Bergen adventure, it is tops, and I loved it.
However it isn’t truly a mystery. The readers know who the kidnapper is from
the start. Plus, the police procedural is a travesty. I have several problems
with it: there is too much repeating of information, which is unnecessary for
the reader. Please don’t pound the stuff in our head over and over, once or
twice should be enough. The FBI and police officials need to know real
interrogation and questioning technics. They reminded me of 1930s rubber hose
cops. Nothing was done right. And did the chief of police really call out the
National Guard? Really? And the chief of police would never bully the manager
of the DIA. His lawyers would have walked all over him, the mayor, and police
commissioner. The chief would have been placed on administrative leave for his
actions. Where did these law enforcement people get their training? Gee …
The fact that so far all four novels have directly or
indirectly involved Liv’s family or associates was okay when she was an
independent investigator, but becomes a bit tried and tired now. She is a
full-fledged FBI agent and I hope she will branch out into investigations
outside her family and immediate friends. And I don’t think some millionaire
could tell the Director of the FBI whom to assign on a case, especially a green
agent as head investigator. There is too much delay before they start checking
registered sex offenders and pedophiles. Instead they spend all their time at
the airport going through massive tons of trash. They waited 24 hours before
even considering registered sex offenders! The FBI has a large network of
investigators across the country, but everyone has to be brought to the Denver
airport from California and New York, causing even more delay? Sandra Brannan
is a better plotter than this, and I was disappointed in some aspects of the
story. And for crying out loud, have Liv pick one of the men as her boyfriend,
this is sounding like a Soap Opera instead of a mystery.
The plot was okay, but the police procedural could
have been done better. Because it is fiction, I will accept that everything
turns out hunky-dory, and everyone lives happily ever after, but in real life
that’s not how things end. Sandra Brannan is a better plotter than this. Still,
for those fans of Liv Bergen and the author, if the reader will overlook the
flaws, I think they will find an enjoyable read in “Noah’s Rainy Day”. For me
it was another great Liv Bergen adventure, despite the problems, and highly
recommended.
Tom Johnson
Detective Mystery Stories
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