Cliff Lords

After losing his entire family, Biko lives on a solo path. On a cold night, he encounters what he recalls to be a dream only to wake up in a house that he's never been in before. He meets a woman with deadly eyes and a man who can disappear. After learning that Biko is a powerful lord, he is granted the task to lead a group of newcomers in a war that threatens to end life on Earth. As time gets shorter, Biko is tested to abandon his selfish ways and save the world with a team that will forever be known as The Cliff Lords. Enter the safe as each lord discovers their weapon that will unleash their true powers as they hurry to overcome negativity in order to win the many battles that threaten to corrupt their existence. Who are these lords? How did they come to be? Are they strong enough to protect mankind? Find out and follow the story of magic and mind control.

Cliff Lords: Weapons of Disaster (Superhero Fiction)

By SLF Entertainment

Independent Publishing Platform

ASIN # B07NCX5QS6

Price Free (Kindle)

41 Pages

Rating 4-Stars

“A Neat Story”

Biko is sleeping in an abandoned house when he’s awakened mysteriously. Running from the room he encounters a man in the shadows, then he wakes again in another house and meets a mysterious woman with dangerous dark eyes. She takes him to meet an even stranger man who can disappear at will. He learns that he has been selected by a Head Lord to join the Cliff Lords in their fight to save the world. He begins training, and soon learns his super powers, then more are brought and he must train them. Something is coming against the world and human race, and they don’t have much time to prepare for the battle.

This was a neat story, though short, and we just barely touch the surface of the situation, and when it ends, we don’t know any more than we did at first. This superhero team is about to face a powerful enemy that might be stronger than they are. But what, we don’t know, and that’s a shame. We should have been given at least a quick look at what’s coming. My biggest complaint, however, is the lack of good descriptive narrative. We just see the basics of the characters, not enough to even picture them clearly. Hopefully, the author will go into more detail in description. This started out as a comic book proposal, but became a superhero prose story instead. Granted, the art would have provided most of the description, but without art the author should have dug deeper into each character. Highly recommended for comic book superhero fans.

Tom Johnson

Author of GUNS OF THE BLACK GHOST