Lilith Cohen the stoic veteran assassin
augmented by Nanotechnology lives a double life with her husband of two years.
Keeping him believing in a beautiful lie that his loving wife is just a fashion
designer.
Agent Cohen travels to Golan Heights, Israel for
what she thinks is just another run of the mill assassination, but to her
surprise, there’s something off about the bloody Civil War that rages
throughout Syria.
What starts as a routine kill order turns out
to be anything but. This terrorist leader and his men are armed with advanced
weapons, which leads her to one conclusion, there’s a Merchant of Death
profiting from the bloodshed. Will her hunt for this shadowy profiteer send her
down a road she wished she never went down?
Lilith
Cohen: Merchants of Death (Men’s Action Novel)
By
William J. Manning
Solstice
Publishing
ASIN
#B07B7PV4S4
Price
$4.99 (Kindle)
356
Pages
Rating
4-Stars
The author gave me a copy of
the book for an honest review. Lilith
Cohen is an ex Israeli Mossad, now working for a special unit of assassins
called the Hunters. She’s married to a doctor in Florida as a cover, and
pretends to be a fashion designer. On an assignment in Israel she discovers
someone is arming the terrorists with advanced weaponry. This leads her to an
American based security firm, Black Reign. Not only are they providing
high-grade weapons, but drugs and sex slaves around the world. Lilith wants to
go after them, but the upper command refuses, and eventually dismisses her from
service. But she and her ex-trainer continue their research into the
organization, while she hires out to the CIA and DEA until she can attack Black
Reign.
This was an interesting plot,
but the story needed tightening. It was all over the place. She gets ten
million dollars for one assignment, five million dollars for another, yet does
penny ante assignments locally when she doesn’t need to, and has no connection
to the story. It’s merely keeping the action going. I liked the action, but
keep it focused. What hurt her character most, I think, is all the crying she
does. Here we have this well trained killer who can enter secure compounds and
destroy the camp and kill all within; she’s trained in weapons and martial arts
– Krav Maga, Hapkido, and Kapap, and should be a cold, calculating assassin,
but she’s constantly breaking down and crying. I think the author will have a
winning combination of good plot and characters once he tightens his writing
style and mold his characters to their full potential. Regardless, the action
keeps the story moving, and I think readers will appreciate that. Highly
recommended.
Tom
Johnson
Author
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